yesterday i request a story to Tharangni that's made from three words: complicated, girl, and colour. She did quite well! her story is very interesting to read ;D
wanna read her story?
heehee i kinda hide it cause it's gonna be long if i didn't hide it ;D
so i told her she can request three words to me to for a short story. here's what she had requested:
hees i wanna write it now sweety ;D
pardon if there's some grammar or words that's wrong cos my English is not as good as yours D:
repost it and link me back okay?
*ahem*
The Sweetest Christmas Gift
It's kinda unexpected if you think back again about what happened last christmas.
it's a very dissapointing year, so i thought the christmas would be very much dissapointing too.
no gifts from my parents, no happy dinner, no christmas tree..
because my family's financial is not that good; my dad just resigned himself, so i didn't expect much in that one-day christmas. but who know what will happen, right?
i mean nothing is impossible.
then, the miracle happens.
just when i thought the worst are going to come, santa claus give me the best christmas gift ever!
my parents both saved their money and bought a DSLR camera for me!
i burst into tears, i hugged my mom immediately once i saw the lovely gift that i had ever wished for.
and then, that seconds, i realize although my family don't have that much money, i still am the most fortunate children in the world.
i hug that camera, and i started clicking the snap button repeatedly.
since then, my life has never been more fun.
*****
THERE :D
how is my story, dear? :D
i know, lousy much, right? =___=
im a noob at making stories, i think i should learn more from you. you are a pro D:
well i think that's all for now :D
gotta post later on ~
btw try clicking the green circle at the navigation.
i have something special for you guys at the profile section ;D
wanna read her story?
heehee i kinda hide it cause it's gonna be long if i didn't hide it ;D
so i told her she can request three words to me to for a short story. here's what she had requested:
- fortunate
- fun
- camera
hees i wanna write it now sweety ;D
pardon if there's some grammar or words that's wrong cos my English is not as good as yours D:
repost it and link me back okay?
*ahem*
It's kinda unexpected if you think back again about what happened last christmas.
it's a very dissapointing year, so i thought the christmas would be very much dissapointing too.
no gifts from my parents, no happy dinner, no christmas tree..
because my family's financial is not that good; my dad just resigned himself, so i didn't expect much in that one-day christmas. but who know what will happen, right?
i mean nothing is impossible.
then, the miracle happens.
just when i thought the worst are going to come, santa claus give me the best christmas gift ever!
my parents both saved their money and bought a DSLR camera for me!
i burst into tears, i hugged my mom immediately once i saw the lovely gift that i had ever wished for.
and then, that seconds, i realize although my family don't have that much money, i still am the most fortunate children in the world.
i hug that camera, and i started clicking the snap button repeatedly.
since then, my life has never been more fun.
THERE :D
how is my story, dear? :D
i know, lousy much, right? =___=
im a noob at making stories, i think i should learn more from you. you are a pro D:
well i think that's all for now :D
gotta post later on ~
btw try clicking the green circle at the navigation.
i have something special for you guys at the profile section ;D
omg your story is so good :D your english is hell awesome ;)
ReplyDeleteso bluffiiiinnnggg D:
ReplyDeleteLOL i'm not :O! it's the truth, what are you talking about Susan :D
ReplyDeletexD thank you then :3
ReplyDeletehahas yay :D LOL
ReplyDeleteOhmigod! i loved this story! it is so good and ...warm! ^_^
ReplyDeletenaaaaaww thankies! :3
ReplyDeleteim glad you like it!